Friday, 28 October 2011

Main Character

The main character in my story Stones, Garnet is a teen boy who has lots and lots of problem with girls. His   mom is the writer in the National Geographic, Garnets dad is a anique freak he will look in garage sale in town or the news paper for anythings he can find his dad also owns a aniques store. So as I was saying Garnet has not a lot of friends and the girls at his school think Garnet is a loser so no one in his school really likes him. Garnets teachers think he has Attention Defisent Disorter or ADD because he can't sit still or pay attension for more that 10 minutes without getting destracted and his teachers think he is a smart kid but he just doesn't show it, they all hate Garnet because he doesn't be quiet or sit still. Garnet has been embrassed by lots of girls  before, like being used for a better or much hotter guy. Garnets life is not the best but as he goes a long in life he finds that he belong in world for a reason.
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4 comments:

  1. Jason R.2 November 2011 at 06:58

    your summary of your main character is pretty good, i kinda feel bad for the main character.

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  2. Jason R.2 November 2011 at 11:07

    The video is pretty funny but is the main character supposed to be the kid?

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  3. Jason R.3 November 2011 at 06:39

    try not to use the word like too much it makes the sentence kinda awkward.

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  4. Justin9 December 2011 at 11:08

    Try to stay on topic for the entire length of time that you want to talk about the thing instead of switching and coming back to it later.

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